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안녕하세요. 저는 대구에 사는 한 학생입니다. 아침에 피곤한 것을 느껴본 적이 있으신가요? 저는 잠에 대한 고민이 있어요.
겨울방학이 시작되었을 때, 저는 매일 놀았어요. 그러면서 잠을 늦게 자게 되었죠. 그렇게 시간은 흘러 개학 하루 전, 평소같이 늦게 잠을 잤습니다. 다음날 저는 매우 힘들었어요. 그래서 그때부터 수면시간을 바꿔야겠다고 생각했습니다.
우선 저는 8시간동안 잠을 자려고 시도했어요. 매우 피곤했어요. 또 다른 날에는 14시간동안 잠을 잤는데, 더욱 피곤했어요. 그 이후에도 저는 다양한 방법을 시도했습니다. 그래도 저는 아직 규칙적으로 잠을 자지 못하고 있어요. 일찍 자고 일찍 일어나는 좋은 방법이 있을까요?
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Hello, I am a student who lives in Daegu. Have you ever felt tired in the morning? I have a con cern about sleep.
When winter vacation started, I played every day. That's how I ended up sleeping late. That's how time passed and I slept late as usual a day before school. The naxt day, I had a hard time, so I thought I should change my sleep time from then on.
First, I tried to sleep for eight hours. I was very tired. On another day, I slept for 14 hours and I was even more tired. Even After that, I try various methods. Still, I haven't been able to sleep regularly yet. Is there a good way to go to bed early and wake up early?
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대소문자 구분 등 진짜 틀린거 하나하나 다 알려주세요 제발 ㅜㅜ 정확하게요.. 진짜 급해요제발ㅜㅜㅜㅜ
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Hello, I am a student living in Daegu. Have you ever experienced feeling exhausted in the morning? I'm having some trouble with my sleep.
When the winter vacation began, I spent every day having fun. As a result, I often went to bed late. Time flew by, and I continued this habit until the night before the first day back at school. The next day, I was extremely tired. That’s when I realized I needed to adjust my sleeping schedule.
Initially, I attempted to sleep for eight hours. However, I still felt tired. On another day, I slept for 14 hours, only to find myself even more exhausted. I've tried various methods since then, but I haven’t yet established a regular sleep pattern. Is there an effective way to fall asleep early and wake up early?
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Hello, I'm a student residing in Daegu. Have you ever woken up feeling completely drained? I'm struggling with my sleep patterns.
As winter vacation commenced, I dedicated each day to enjoyment, resulting in my habit of going to bed late. This pattern persisted until the night prior to the first day back to school. The following morning, I was overwhelmed with fatigue. It was then that I acknowledged the necessity to revise my sleep habits.
At first, I endeavored to secure a full eight hours of sleep, yet I found myself still weary. In another instance, I slumbered for 14 hours, only to feel more depleted. Despite experimenting with various strategies since then, I've yet to find a consistent and restorative sleep routine. Is there an effective strategy for settling down early and greeting the morning refreshed?